Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Feb• 03•12

No excuses…

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT
by Kari Hawkey

What is your favorite number?
Go to Wikipedia. Click on the random article button on the left hand side to the count of your favorite number. (Example, 7 times) Now, write about the subject matter in that article.

*If you aren’t happy with the topic, click it one more time or click on the links within the text you are viewing.

 

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PROSE PROMPT
by Cynthia Romanowski

Write for 10 minutes about the worst thing your protagonist has ever done. Write for 10 minutes about the most pathetic feelings your antagonist has ever had. Or… do this with yourself as the main character and burn the evidence if it doesn’t lead to a story.

 

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If there’s a book you really want to read,
but it hasn’t been written yet,
then you must write it.

~Toni Morrison


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Saving Lives

Written By: John - Jan• 30•12

With the approach of Oscar season, TV and the Internet are busy reminding us of great films of the past. It’s interesting to see how changes in American culture have influenced films over the past decades and how films have influenced American culture. In comedy it’s particularly evident. Comedy often relies on breaking taboos and disrupting the social order. The irreverent nature of comedy is one of its main attractions and virtues. As societal mores change, the fodder for good humor also changes. What was once funny, might not be as humorous today. And what is now funny, was once inconceivable. Of course the basic principles of comedy remain the same — exaggeration, absurdity, irony, etc. — but the subject of what is funny changes. The food poisoned bride-to-be shitting in the street in Bridesmaids after her bridesmaid relieved herself in the sink of a fancy wedding gown shop would have been an unlikely, even impossible, premise in the conservative fifties and early sixties films of Bob Hope and Doris Day. But today it’s par for the course.

Along with cultural attitudes, the popularity of different genres has also changed throughout the decades. The Western, such as The Searchers and One Eyed Jacks, used to be Hollywood’s dominant genre when the country was younger and the adventure of the frontier and the rugged individualist were still fresh in everyone’s minds. But now the Western is basically non-existent. Cowboys and Aliens was a clever premise combining the old school Western genre with the modern hero adventure that supplanted it, the sci-fi, except that the execution of the movie’s premise left a lot to be desired.

Also, what we see on film these days is different from what we might have seen years ago. The massive crowds of extras, as in Ben Hur or King Solomon’s Mines, have basically vanished. Now, with computer generated effects we can paint in huge crowds that previously required live actors. A certain rawness has also disappeared from films. Today it’s unlikely that the final scenes of John Huston’s brilliant classic The Misfits, with the tortuous wrangling of the wild mustangs, would have been depicted in the same way. At the time, the American Humane Society didn’t monitor animal action on sets and animals often died at the hands of filmmakers. Before the seventies, trip wires were often used to bring down horses, often resulting in leg fractures. In very early films they actually shot the horses. Fortunately, these cruel and inhumane practices have been abolished in American films.

Social awareness has also spared us from the racist and sexist attitudes that go all the way back to films like D.W. Griffith’s Birth of a Nation. Films reflect the culture of the day, and eventually the culture reflects those films. It’s a symbiotic relationship and one that changes with the years. As filmmakers, we sometimes console ourselves that “filmmaking isn’t brain surgery; it’s not saving lives,” as if the consequences of our actions and our films were minimal. If movies don’t actually save lives, however, filmmaking has an enormous effect on the lives of people around the world, including brain surgeons.

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Jan• 27•12

Why not try one of these on for size…

 

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Write a poem about the last meal you ate.

Who were you with?  Did you meet a friend?  Were you alone?  Did the food give you indigestion?  What did you wish you ate instead?  Did you have a drink?  Was your meal sad and microwaved?  Was it fast food?  Or, was it ethnic, healthy, organic, Vegan, etc.?  Did you go to a chain restaurant?  Was the waiter/waitress rude?  Describe more than just the food.

 

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PROSE PROMPT

by Cynthia Romanowski

 

Make a list of names for every person you have ever dated/tried to date/slept with and write a two-line description of who they are, what they look like, and where it all went wrong. Example: Bobby Barker, high school wrestling team captain with cauliflower ears and constant gym shorts smell wafting off him, I’m pretty sure he was into dudes. (Extra points if you don’t feel depressed after this exercise.)

 

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You must stay drunk on writing

so reality cannot destroy you.

~Ray Bradbury

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A Glimpse into a Two-Poet Household

Written By: Lori - Jan• 22•12

When I accepted the poems “It Takes More Than a Robin to Make Winter Cold” by Chris Pexa and “Postscript” and “Dear Richard Hugo,” by Melissa Cundieff for the winter issue of The Coachella Review, I had no way of knowing they were a married couple; it wasn’t until their bios came in and Melissa Cundieff turned into Melissa Cundieff-Pexa that I realized there might be a connection. I asked her if she happened to be married to “a guy named Chris.” Indeed, she wrote back, they were married. 

It is easy to imagine when two poets marry there would be extraordinary love letters and wild, sexy linguistics, but I could just as easily imagine them channeling parts of Plath and Hughes at some point.  So I was eager to take this opportunity and quiz them on what it’s like being in a two-poet household. 

I asked them to each answer the questions separately…

Ok, who has more books on their nightstand?  How do the stacks differ in content? 

CHRIS:  If we had nightstands, I imagine them staggered by the weight of trashy detective novels and gardening/seed catalogs (my side), and by Us Weeklies and Dylan Thomas’s Collected (her side). On these figurative nightstands would also be Bolaño and Murakami novels, a Grimm’s Fairy Tales with illustrations by Maurice Sendak, and tons of overdue kids’ books from the library, including three copies of The Giving Tree.

Do you edit each other’s work?

CHRIS:  No. We read each other’s poems, but avoid anything like an editorial response. For both of us, the temptation to rewrite one another in our own voices is too strong, and too dangerous. 

MELISSA:   Not really. I certainly don’t edit Chris’s work, and we’ve gotten into some pretty heated debates over edits he’s made to mine. It seems best if we only read each other’s poem and offer a firm pat on the back.

Is there any healthy (or unhealthy?) competition between the two of you?

CHRIS:  We write such different poems, there’s not much basis for comparison or competition. I generally find much more to admire in Melissa’s poems than in my own, though. She has this almost genetic feeling for the grotesque, something that comes from her training in art, I think, which I’m totally jealous of, and which is only ever ornamental, not essential, to my own writing. Melissa’s poems are the lovechild of Leonard Baskin and Edward Gorey, who got together on our bookshelf one night, got very drunk on gin, and agreed there should be a literary version of their drawings in the world.

MELISSA:  Not at all. We’re very, very happy for each other when something good happens and disappointed when one of us is rejected. The latter is more common, of course. Either way, we take it all in stride.

How much poetry talk in general is there in your household?

MELISSA:  Quite a lot. Chris is very resourceful at the library. He comes home with lots of obscure treats. I’m bad about rereading my obsessions, so it’s really nice to live with someone who consistently reads new things. Our poetry conversations happen at night after our daughter is asleep, and more often than not while we’re watching an 80’s horror movie on Netflix. I like to dumb it down more than anyone I know. Chris finds this endearing.

CHRIS:  I think Melissa will tell you we prefer talking about really terrible movies more than we do about poetry. But that’s a lie. We love to gossip about the lives of poets we know. Who doesn’t? Is that talking about poetry? I think it is. Middle-school locker-style.

How did you meet? 

MELISSA:  Oh my. A long story. I was his student when he was getting his MFA at Arizona State University. In fact, he was my very first poetry teacher. It wasn’t until two years later that we got together. Five weeks after that we eloped…on Halloween. At a shrine in Tucson for sinners. Then we got drunk and our friends, the three that were invited to the wedding, disappeared into our hotel room, ate our cake, and passed out in our bed. It’s like we were always meant to be parents.

CHRIS:  In scandal. Or maybe, we ended up in scandal, eloping at the only shrine (that I know of) dedicated to a sinner—El Tiradito, “the castaway”—who fell into a tragic love triangle. Anyway, we met when I was an MFA student. Melissa was taking her first poetry workshop. I hardly noticed her, only saw that she wore long denim skirts and flip flops a lot of the time. Honestly, I thought she was Mormon. So when I met her again a couple of years later, dating my best friend, I wondered if he had converted to the Church of Latter Day Saints.

MELISSA:  I might add, I never wore long denim skirts. Chris had a thing for virginal, marching band types, and he must have been unconsciously projecting some hopefulness onto me, his future wife. When we met, I was quite literally employed at Hooter’s. Take from that what you will. Oh, and I thought 27 year old Chris looked like Eddie Vedder. I still do, and that is why we are married today. 

Describe each other’s poetic style.

CHRIS:  Melissa is, just now, loss-obsessed. I would say that she, like so many poets right now, finds the elegy to be the genre that suits a shared sense of certain worlds, certain possibilities, closing down. Even as others, other democratic vistas, maybe, exuberantly open up. And even though she keeps personal griefs close to the chest, she’s able to transport some of their strange, heavy energy into these persona poems that are really moving. I think of Brenda Hillman’s Death Tractates existing in tandem with Bright Existence, the huge emotional gesture made between these two volumes. And I think Melissa’s poems now are working toward a similar, and similarly ambitious, sweep—recklessly gorgeous poems about lost brothers, suicides, and carnival sideshow animals. It’s all creepy and amazing.

MELISSA:  Chris is much more feral, sometimes vulgar, and comes up with crazy musical lines. He’s like a philosopher pit bull, if you will. We kind of collect stray dogs, so it’s no wonder. He also writes a lot of academic criticism, being a PhD candidate and all. Even his papers are like poetry, and for this I am jealous. I must admit. 

There is a long colorful history of poet-couples.  What are the challenging and enjoyable parts of being married to another writer/poet? 

MELISSA:  We say ridiculous things that maybe only the other can appreciate or even understand. We have something of a private language. Our daughter has learned it, enhanced it.  She’s a very strange a magical person, and I like to give myself and Chris some credit for that.

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Jan• 20•12

Here are your weekend writing prompts…

 

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Make a list of things that frighten you.  Write an image for each and then react to them with humor.  Attempt to lessen the fear with disregard in your writing.  Be honest and get to the root of your fear. Look over all of your lines and cut as needed.

 

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PROSE PROMPT

by Cynthia Romanowski

 

Imagine that a future version of yourself (or one of your characters) could write a short letter to their past self as a sort of snapshot or personal warning device for the upcoming year.  What insights would the future version of yourself or your character say?  (Bonus points:  writing it in second person,  i.e. Dear 21-year-old Self… )


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The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say,

but what we are unable to say.

-Anaïs Nin

 

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The State of the Short Story: A Quick Chat with Josh Rolnick

Written By: Cynthia - Jan• 18•12

I have mixed feeling about going to readings. Every month it seems like there are at least 2-3 readings around Los Angeles that I hear about. Though I dutifully mark my calendar and most times fully intend to attend them, more often than not when the day finally rolls around I’m either tired (I live in OC so it’s kind of a trek) or I go into social anxiety mode and get nervous just thinking about being around people and having to be friendly and attempt to “mingle,” so usually I choose to stay in the dark cave that is my apartment. Dani Shapiro actually has an excellent blog post that gets into this…

But at the same time, if a reading is good–if the writing captures and whisks me away for a while (mitigating said social awkwardness)– I feel like there is nothing is more invigorating. As a writer, a great reading is like a B-12 vitamin for motivation, especially if I’m in a slump. And it often reminds me why I write, why I spend all this time struggling to create these stories, it’s about that connection. That shared emotional experience and understanding that comes from a well-crafted piece of prose.

Back in September, I attended a reading that had just that effect, it was at Skylight Books in Los Feliz and Edan Lepucki was reading with Josh Rolnick who was reading from his new short story collection “Pulp and Paper.” After the reading they interviewed each other briefly (they both went to Iowa for their MFA’s) and what stood out to me was what Josh had to say about his experience as a short story writer in today’s market.

So just in case you missed the reading for geographical reasons or if you decided to stay in the cave like I so often do, I went ahead and sent Josh some questions to try and re-invent the evening a bit (for full effect you’ll have to pick up his book and Edan’s novella). Here’s what he had to say:

Josh Rolnick is the author of "Pulp and Paper"

1)    Your new book “Pulp and Paper” is a debut collection of short stories that all take place in Brooklyn, first off how long have you been working on this collection? Are any of these stories ones that you worked on at Iowa?

Well, a slight correction. I currently live in Brooklyn. The stories are in fact divided equally between New Jersey and New York state. But they range all across the two states. They are set in the suburbs and in the city; at the Shore and in the mountains. My hope is that the settings give a sense of the rich geographic diversity of the neighboring states.

There is one story set in Brooklyn: “The Carousel.” This story is about an aging carousel operator who sees the modern world kind of passing him by. But it’s the only one set in New York City.

I started writing the stories in this collection 13 years ago. That’s when I enrolled in the part-time fiction writing program at Johns Hopkins and wrote the first few lines of “Mainlanders.” It might seem like a simple, relatively straightforward coming-of-age story, but “Mainlanders” actually took me 13 years to complete – I finished it in early 2011, as I was preparing my manuscript for publication.

I would say that I have been working more intensely on the book for the past 6 or 7 years – since I enrolled in the Iowa Writers’ Workshop. Most of the stories took at least 2 years to write; usually, much longer. My writing process has never been a quick one; my stories, to paraphrase John Steinbeck, tend to crawl onto the page. It’s a process of writing, revising, showing the work to readers, and then repeating the process, and it usually takes me several months before I even know what the story is really about.

I started half of the stories in the collection (“Innkeeping,” “Mainlanders,” “Big Lake,” “Carousel”) at Johns Hopkins, before I got to Iowa. Four (“Funnyboy,” “Big River,” “Pulp and Paper,” “The Herald”) were started at Iowa. I actually find that it’s easier sometimes to write about a place once you leave it – and it works its way into your imagination – so who knows, maybe the next thing I write will be set in Iowa City.

2)   That was going to be my next question!  …Since you’ve moved around the country a lot and lived in many different places, do you think it’s easier to write about a place while you’re living there or once you’ve gotten away from it for a while?

Ah – see above. Robert Olen Butler, a writer I admire greatly, talked about the importance of “forgetting” for fiction writers. He tells a great story. After he got out of the Vietnam War, he wrote a book set in Vietnam that was, as he tells it, not very good. Years later, after he “forgot” the details of life in Vietnam to some extent – and his imagination and subconscious mind took over – he wrote another book about Vietnam. That book is the short story collection “Good Scent From a Strange Mountain” – which won the Pulitzer Prize.

I do think there’s something to this. When we live in a place, it sometimes fails to inspire us or become grist for our imagination. It’s just “home” – the place we pay bills and take out the trash and ride to work in traffic. Once we leave, though, it’s as if the dimensions of the place expand. It’s not constrained anymore by familiarity. We are able to “see” things we never saw when we lived there – the falling down barn on the side of the field that we passed umpteen times on the way to work but never really looked at; that mysterious guy with the scraggily hair who was always circling classifieds in the coffee shop; the sound of the train horn after midnight on the tracks you’d almost forgotten were in the woods behind your home. It’s as if imagination is freer to take over – and you can therefore better appreciate the limitlessness of a place — once you’ve moved on.

There are I’m sure a million exceptions to this rule. Many, many people do write about where they live. In my case, I’ve always been more drawn to places I’ve left.

3)    Can you talk a little bit about your experience as a short story writer in today’s publishing market, which seems to be primarily interested in novels/novelists? I know you have a great anecdote about a novel you once conjured on the spot to an interested agent…

That’s true. When I was in Iowa, agents used to come to meet with students. I really appreciated those visits – it was a great chance to learn more about how the industry worked. The thing was, most of the agents were not ultimately interested in representing me, because I was working on a book of stories – not a novel. Inevitably, in our conversations, we’d get to a point where they’d say: “I really like your stories … are you working on a novel?” Which can get frustrating over time.

In one of my meetings, when an agent got around to asking me if I was working on a novel, I decided – what have I got to lose? I told her that in fact, yes, I was working on a novel. She wanted details. So I started making them up on the spot. I told her I was working on a book set on the Jersey Shore in the time before the Coast Guard. I knew from research I’d done for a short story that they used to have these things called “Saving Stations” – shacks along the beach manned by locals who would keep watch during a storm; if they spotted a foundering ship, they’d row out to try to rescue people. I told her my novel was about a shipwreck in a terrible storm, a love story about a young saving station tough and the girl he saves in the surf. The problem was – I hadn’t written a single word.

She looked at me across a big wooden table. I was all-but-certain I’d ruined my career as a writer before it’d even started. That’s when she smiled and said: “I love it!” She was ready to represent me on the spot.

This story aside, I really have had a lot of good fortune in my career as a story writer. Six of the eight short stories that appear in “Pulp and Paper” were first published in literary journals – from The Harvard Review to Arts & Letters – and two of those won national fiction awards. I find writing and submitting short stories for publication a great way for young writers to get their work in front of editors and, if they’re lucky, even a few readers.

I should say – now that my collection of short stories has been published, I’ve seen a very different side of the industry. I was very fortunate that my collection won the John Simmons Short Fiction Award – which comes with publication by the University of Iowa Press. Since my book came out in October, I have travelled the country on a book tour, reading mostly at independent bookstores, and have found people incredibly receptive to the short story form. All told, more than 600 people came out to my readings – nearly 20 events. It may be true that short story collections don’t sell as well as novels – but it’s also true that there are still a lot of people interested in reading short stories and exposing themselves to the form.

4)    What is it about short fiction that appeals to you as a writer as opposed to a longer narrative structure?

In the introduction to the 1997 edition of The Best American Short Stories, Annie Proulx writes that stories have “a trimmed, useful tautness implying a function for the reader beyond entertainment.” She continues: “We accept the idea that there is some nugget of embedded truth in a short story.” This is exactly why I love short stories. It’s emotion achieved through compression. It’s almost as if the author is saying to the reader: See these five pages? This is all there is. This is all you need to know about this particular person’s life, in order to “get” what I’m trying to convey. Nail down the furniture. A cyclone’s coming through.

One of my all-time-favorite short stories is “The Wig” by Brady Udall. It’s five paragraphs long – less than a page. It’s about an 8-year-old boy who finds a wig in a dumpster and puts it on. His dad tells him to take it off, but the boy ignores him, munching his breakfast cereal. The dad suddenly remembers a moment “real or imagined” from “before the accident”: his wife, her hair slightly darker than the wig, sitting in that same chair where his son sits, reading the paper to see how the Blackhawks did. He walks over, picks up his son, holds him against his chest, puts his nose to the wig. His son hugs him, “and for maybe a few seconds we were together again, the three of us.” It’s a devastating moment, suffused with loss and yearning. That dad might be 40-something-years old – but we don’t need 40 years of his life; we don’t need to know the wrong or right turns he took in his life, who his ancestors were or what ship they came over in; the only thing we need to know to understand him in that moment can be conveyed in one short scene, just a few hundred words. It’s like a swift, hard punch to the gut. Any longer, and it would lose some of its beauty and power.

This is what I love about short stories. This payoff. The way the best stories can show us, to paraphrase Anne Lamott, the ways in which we take care of one another. And also let us feel it.

5)    Can you talk about how you approach fiction vs. your work as a journalist, do these different areas inform one another in any way?

Sure – they are totally different. When I write nonfiction, say a magazine piece, I’ve got my materials around me – interview questions, quotes, facts, background – and a vague sense of how it might all come together in a way that makes sense for a reader.

When I sit down to write fiction, I have absolutely no idea where I’m going or what I’m going to be writing about. I may start with an image, or a scent, or a line of dialogue. I have no outline. I have not done any research. My aim is to tap into my imagination — the dream-space, as Robert Olen Butler calls it – to learn what it is that I’m supposed to be saying. I’m trying to find characters that seem real to me, and learn who they are, what they want, and why. The minute I start to try to “steer” my characters with my conscious mind, the stories go off the rails. If my characters can surprise me, that tells me I’m on to something.

A big part of my education as a writer was simply learning that many writers approach their work this way. Michael Ondaatje talks about how when he wrote the “English Patient,” he didn’t have “any sure sense of what’s happening or even what’s going to happen.” Similarly, E.L. Doctorow says that writing a novel is like driving across country at night – you can only see as far as the front of your headlights, but you can make the whole trip that way. I take the same approach – writing fiction is for me an act of discovery in a way that journalism never was.

6)    What are you currently working on?

Ah – that’s the 60 million dollar question these days. My book came out in October, and I have been on a book tour ever since. After a decade or so writing it, I felt I needed to work full-time on getting “Pulp and Paper” out there – into the hands of readers, since that is in the end the whole point. Now that my tour is winding down, I will be going to work on a novel.

It’s too early to say what it’s going to be about yet. I’m just getting into the car and flipping the headlights on. Come back to me in six months or so, and I’ll let you know where I’ve been.

 

 

 

 

 

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Winter Wonderland

Written By: John - Jan• 16•12

Hope you all had a great holiday season. If you’re indoors staying out of the frost and snow or if you’re kicking back in more temperate climates — as we do here in Coachella territory — you’ll want to check out the cool stuff coming up in the Winter issue of The Coachella Review. In the world of Film and Plays we’re excited to present a wonderful interview with the immensely talented screenwriter, Jeff Stockwell. Jeff wrote The Dangerous Lives of Altar Boys and Bridge to Terabithia, among his many film and television achievements. Jeff is one of the funnier guys I know, but he also has a serious side and he shared a lot a great insights with us during his interview earlier this month. We’re also fortunate to have a new short movie entitled Death of a Dream from filmmaker and musician Tiffany McMillin. Last issue our readers/viewers told us how much they enjoyed Erik Schneider’s wacky comedic short, The Deer. This issue we’ve shifted our focus from sorta crude guy humor to impassioned female angst. I hope you enjoy the film as much as we have. And lastly, I’m delighted to present the clever short script, Penance, by a highly promising newcomer, Mauricio Arnaud, who is no stranger to the arts, having a successful career as a fine furniture designer, among other creative ventures. Check out all the new offerings and let us know what you think. We’ll be seeing you shortly in the new issue of The Coachella Review.

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Jan• 13•12

Suffer from writer’s block? That’s no excuse.

 

Sometimes all it takes is a few words or ideas on the page to get you started.  Quit giving yourself anxiety.  Tell your self-critic to shut up… and use a writing prompt.  Copy it down so you are no longer staring at a vacuous space on your computer screen or sheet of paper.

 

If you need more than just a kick in the pants to get going, take out your kitchen timer. Set it to 30 minutes and write as much as you can…

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Keep a dream log for a week.  As soon as you wake up, write down everything you remember.  Write every image and emotion you can recall.  Once you have a list, turn these ideas into a surrealist poem.  (For more information, read Andre Breton’s Le Manifeste du Surréalisme – “Surrealism is based on the belief in the superior reality of certain forms of association heretofore neglected, in the omnipotence of the dream, and in the disinterested play of thought. It leads to the permanent destruction of all other psychic mechanisms and to its substitution for them in the solution of the principal problems of life.”  You may also want to visit the website, http://www.metmuseum.org/toah/hd/surr/hd_surr.htm)

 

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PROSE PROMPT

by Cynthia Romanowski

 

Write a journal entry for your main character (or character you’re developing) dated January 1st.  (You pick the year.)  Was their New Year’s amazing or depressing?  What did they do?  Who did they hang out with?  Who do they wish did?  Do they have any resolutions or aspirations for the New Year?  Is there a certain person or activity they should stay away from in the year?  Make it a voice-y first person confession for a gold star.

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“There is no such thing as writer’s block for writers

whose standards are low enough.”

~ William Stafford

 

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New Blog Series…The Story Behind The Story: 1

Written By: Cynthia - Jan• 12•12

Here at TCR we get stories from a wide array of people, in our fall issue alone we published an MD, a neuroscience PhD from MIT (and the new issue includes work by a pro golfer if I’m not mistaken) and also writers at several different points in their careers– from the unpublished to National Magazine Award finalists, first year MFA students to writers with multiple Pushcart nominations.  In fact that’s probably the best part of working on an online mag of this nature (besides the awesome pay/fame/glory of it all) it’s exciting to have the opportunity to work with people from different walks of life, each on a different journey creatively.

One thing that has always fascinated me about short stories is learning how they come into existence. Some hit like lightening and are finished in an afternoon (that’s never happened to me, but I freaking wish it would) others take years and are revisited and put away several times. Some are extremely autobiographical while others have wildly imaginative fictional elements that are enviable. I guess what I’m try to say is that every story has a, well, story. So I thought it would be cool to sort of start supplementing each issue with an assortment of mini-interviews were we get a kind of  ”behind the scenes”  look at how what we publish comes to be.

For this first installment, I decided to speak with that same brainy neuroscience PhD that I mentioned above, Becca Schwarzlose, to chat about her story “Peep” which was featured in our fall issue. While Becca has published several academic articles and written extensively about science this was her first fiction publication. “Peep” is a story that has a very peculiar haunting quality. I’m pretty sure it leaves each reader a little more paranoid than they originally were (I don’t want to spoil anything so you’ll just have to check it out). In fact it was so creepy/realistic/unique, we even ending up nominating it for a Pushcart, not bad for her first publication.

Anyway here’s what she had to say about creating “Peep” and writing in general:

1) First and foremost did you just have a baby!?  I thought I saw something on your blog but I wasn’t sure how old the info was…

Yes! My husband and I had a baby girl at the end of November. Since then we’ve been both exhausted and enthralled. We keep wondering where
this little person came from. We look at her and think, ‘how did we do that?’ It seems like magic.

Becca Schwarzlose's short story "Peep" can be found in the Fall 2011 issue of The Coachella Review

2) Your story “Peep” is in many ways a cautionary tale that forces the reader to consider hypothetical consequences of continuing our current societal obsession with YouTube and intruding on the private lives of others for the sake of entertainment, can you tell me a little about how this story came to you originally?

I think it’s common for writers to explore their fears in fiction. And maybe I’m not the only neurotic person who has had a paranoid moment in a bathroom stall or fitting room. Either way, the central kernel for the story came from one of those moments. Next came the opening line: Memory was the first.  I didn’t know why the young woman’s name was Memory or how the story would play out, only that she would become famous when private footage of her was posted online. From there I let the story lead the way without any idea where it was going. The major questions arose naturally. Where might the current voyeuristic cultural trends lead us if taken to the extreme? And how could we adapt to life in such a world? I didn’t set out to write a cautionary tale or to condemn technology and modern culture. The story simply evolved from some blend of curiosity, anxiety, and imagination.

3) Was your first draft written in first person plural or was that something that you changed later? Also from beginning to end how long did this story take to complete?

The story was always written in first person plural. I never consciously planned to write from that point of view; it simply appeared in the first few sentences and never left. I think it came naturally because collective experience played such a central role in the story. On some level, we are all both perpetrators and victims of this cultural trend to peer into the private lives of others. We watch and we have the potential to be watched. And there I go again, slipping into first person plural.The first draft of “Peep” was written in about a week. Later, I spent a great deal of time nitpicking the details and wording, taking bits out and sometimes adding them back in again. Some of this tweaking wasuseful; much of it was a waste. All of the major writing and revising took place in the first two weeks.

4) You’ve have an extensive and impressive background in science, can you talk a little bit about coming from that area and then finding your voice as a writer? Was it always something you’d been passionate about or did it sneak up on you?

I was an avid fiction reader growing up. I always loved writing poetry and stories but I never considered creative writing for a career or even as a subject to study formally in school. I just wrote because I was compelled to write. I’ve also always loved science and was drawn to the field early. Yet as I progressed in my research career and had less and less spare time for writing, my need to write never waned. At some point, I thought of combining my two passions. In addition to writing fiction, I could write nonfiction to share the beauty and complexity of science with a broader audience. I tried it out and fell in love.

5) Also how does that background in science manifest itself or inform your fiction?

That’s a tough question for me to answer. To some degree my science background must influence my fiction because it has profoundly shaped my worldview. It is my equivalent of religion. How could it not color my writing? Beyond that, I’d say that my training as a scientist taught me to think critically, question everything, and examine each situation from multiple angles – all useful habits in creative writing and probably in life.

6) So you are currently at work on your first novel, can you talk a little bit about where you’re at with that and your experience
studying writing through UCLA Extension?

I’ve been working on the second draft for a while. It still needs some major revisions and I have been letting ideas for that percolate while
I do research for a major neuroscience project. As for UCLA Extension, I’ve really benefited from their Writers’ Program. I took a number of novel writing classes with the wonderful Les Plesko, who guided me through the writing of my first draft and also mentored me through the revision process thus far. And I wrote “Peep” in a UCLA Extension short story writing class with Steve Sohmer. In addition to the great writing instruction, my Extension courses introduced me to other LA-area writers. Many of my fellow students have become dear friends. Whenever we get together we swap honest feedback and moral support, both invaluable fuel for any aspiring writer.

For more of Becca’s writing check out her blog Garden Of The Mind (www.gardenofthemind.com)

 

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Jan• 07•12

Suffer from writer’s block?  That’s no excuse.

Here’s my advice:  sometimes all it takes is a few words on the page to get you started.  Every weekend, Cynthia and I will post writing prompts to help you get those creative juices flowing.  If you need more than just a kick in the pants to get going, take out your kitchen timer.  Set it to 30 minutes and write as much as you can…

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

Chose 3 of your favorite inanimate objects, food, or animals.  Now, write a love letter to each of them.  Feel free to get creepy.

 

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PROSE PROMPT

by Cynthia Romanowski

Write a personal ad for your main character or a character you are trying to develop.  Who are they?  Who or what are they seeking?  If you get stuck read Elizabeth Crane’s story “Ad ” for inspiration.  (Actually, you should probably read it either way cause it’s freakin’ great).

 

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A word is not the same with one writer as with another.

One tears it from his guts.

The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket.

~Charles Peguy

 

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