Pop Culture Eats Itself: A Hunger Games Review

Written By: Lindsey - May• 16•12

Today we have a guest post by Jenn-Anne Gledhill

Yes, I had heard of Hunger Games. Kind of.  It was third on my Tween Fiction radar, behind Vampire Hoo Hoos and Wizards-n-Suches. But the dazzling movie trailer had so piqued my interest in the story that I immediately went out and bought the book.  But then I remembered that whole “The Help” debacle, and knew that I’d better see the movie first, because the book is simply going to be better than the film. So I put the book at the top of my summer reading list, and treated myself to the 2012 “it girl” of movies with a towering cup of Diet Coke and some Milk Duds.

During the movie, I learned that a) pop culture eats itself, then poops itself out again, and b) it looks a little different the second time around having gone through its own guts.  (Cases in point: The VW Bug, Tim Burton’s Willie Wonka, and M and M’s with coconut/pretzel)

“The Hunger Games”  serves up the entire arch of the recent pop culture narrative into a single recipe:  One cup of Survivor. One cup of American Idol. A half a cup of Biggest Loser. Sprinkle in a dash of The Lottery and a pinch of Roman Gladiators.  In a separate bowl, fold in  Jennifer Lawrence, Lenny Kravitz , and  Woody from “Cheers,” bake for 2 hours and 22 minutes,  spread some Tim Burton’s costume designer on top, and voila!  A 2012 blockbuster.

So why didn’t this work for me?  I loved most of the ingredients. Woody Harrelson is the King of Awesome Cameos, and Jennifer Lawrence is, in my opinion, one of the finest young talents on the silver screen today.  (I will even forego the weak performance of the male lead in my analysis.  He couldn’t complete with even one of Jennifer’s silent eyeball monologues, but I’m pretty sure that’s not the reason the movie didn’t jazz me up, so…congrats on getting that big role, young man, I know it’s tough to do in Hollywood,  but please get out of my face, now.) I love elimination reality shows.  I’m the exact target audience for heavy handed manipulation of emotions in popular entertainment, especially when underscored with dramatic, weepy violin music. I will buy you a Cadillac if you can find one “Highway to Heaven” that does not make me cry. I will get sucked into an occasional “Grey’s Anatomy” if I am not extremely careful. And yes, I would like to teach the world to sing, actually..

 

But along comes “The Hunger Games,”  with *spoiler alert* a long, drawn out death scene of a plucky, Tiny Tim-type competitor, adorably named Rue, and I didn’t shed a single tear!

How can this be? I didn’t even have to fight back any tears. I didn’t even have to do the  “Just-shove-the-waves-of sadness – away-from-the-heart-and-into-the-logical-quadrant-of-the-brain-so-I-can-remember-that-it’s-only-a-movie” technique I  taught myself one day to stop myself from bawling  out loud while watching that “Little House On the Prarie”  episode where Mary Ingalls goes blind.   (My hawk-eye dad was across the room, waiting to pounce on any opportunity to mock me for my supernatural ability to suspend any and all disbelief in the presence of the great Michael Landon.)

Why is this?  Why wasn’t I affected?  After all, up until three years ago, I watched almost every single episode of American Idol. You could not take my eyes and ears off the TV screen that first year of Survivor, And the finale of 2008’s Biggest Loser was television magic!

Oh, wait…

Maybe that’s it. We’ve been there, done it, “Hunger Games.” Seeing people figuratively “killed off” by vote or by machete is, well, old hat.  We already know how “The Hunger Games” going to end.  Someone is going to win and get a little fame out of it in the process.

Tell us something we don’t know.

It might have been different back in 2002, when we collectively mourned Justin Guarini’s heartbreaking but good-natured loss to Kelly Clarkson, and then took responsibility for his rejection by nurturing him into the best darn “man on the scene” reporter outside of the Kodak Theater the TV Guide Channel has ever seen. But that was ten years ago, THG.  By now, we have accepted that when we vote those kids off of the American Idol stage, it is most likely the death of their lifelong dream.   “Next!”

Here and now, in 2012, only two things matter in televised eliminations: a) who wins and b) that we see the losers go down in a ball of white hot fire.  I think “The Hunger Games” wants us to be horrified that these young, hot, nubile gladiators are being exploited as they are paraded around the coliseum wearing funky cool clothes and being cheered on like they’re U2.  Instead, we react more like the Romans in the stands than the peasants in the gallows:  We think: “Sure, most of them are going to die soon, but those guys are ROCK stars, man.  What’s so bad about that?“

 

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Interview with Pro Screenwriter Joshua Malkin

Written By: John - May• 14•12

Recently, I had the great delight to interview one of Hollywood’s finest screenwriters, Joshua Malkin. Joshua is currently at work on Buck Rogers In the 25th Century, as well as a horror project for Australian company See Pictures and other horror properties for both Tonic Films and Jeremy Renner’s production company, The Combine.
In 2008, his screenplay Cabin Fever 2: Spring Fever completed production for Lionsgate and he was hired to adapt a series of fantasy/adventure novellas. Since then, he completed an adaptation of the 80’s cult franchise Beastmaster, as well as a dozen rewrites on diverse projects that include childrens’ animation, a historical epic, and a drama set during the 1982 Lebanese war. Joshua received his MFA in Directing from the American Film Institute. His short film, Dust, successfully made rounds on the festival circuit and, among its honors, won a Student Emmy Award as well as Best Dramatic Short at the New York Independent Film Festival. Since then, Joshua has written projects for AltaVista, Giant Door Productions, Fox Searchlight and had another optioned by Nabushea Pictures. He has also written, directed, and produced three documentaries: two about the art of puppetry, and another about underground comics.

JR: What led you into screenwriting?
JM: Baseball, sort of. I’d written many shorts as a Directing Fellow at AFI but my focus was always on the directing. After graduation, a friend introduced me to George Hickenlooper, who ‘mentored’ me – allowing me to rewrite of one of his scripts based on infamous Dodger Bill Buckner. And I found I really loved the experience and the work. I kept pursuing directing, but grew frustrated with the process and decided I should try working on the story end of the equation, too. The initial idea was to write stories I would direct, but screenwriting gradually became the focus. It didn’t turn out exactly the way I intended, but I’m very grateful in many ways.

JR: Have you always written scripts or are there other forms of writing that you pursued or even prefer?
JM: I’ve written video box copy, dirty limericks, cootie catcher fortunes… But, yes, script form came to me early since both my parents wrote, directed and taught theater. Our house was filled with puppets and you can’t be a kid surrounded by puppets and not write scenes for them. After that, yes, I wrote a little short fiction, got some encouragement, and tried my hand at various forms. I hope to tackle a novel at some point. It’s sometimes tough to fit everything you want into a screenplay, and the thought of having some additional “room to move” is enticing. Intimidating, but enticing.

JR: Can you tell us about your latest project(s)?
JM: The name of the game is keeping many ‘irons in the fire.’ But right now my main focus is a re-boot of Buck Rogers In the 25th Century, which has been a lot of fun. Also, surprisingly research intensive. Research gets a bad rap in screenwriting circles because it slows writers down, but I’m an advocate for it. Good science fiction needs science and my partner and I won this job by pitching a very science-based story. Right now we’re spending mornings on the phone with aeronautical engineers and futurists and astronauts who’ve been on the International Space Station. That’s the fun part, the gravy, but the work comes in weaving it all into a believable, grounded world 400 years in the future.

JR: What is your writing routine like, if you have one?
JM: I was taught a simple equation you’ve probably heard: writing=ass in chair. So I’m there, in the chair, most of every day. Naturally, what I do in the chair doesn’t always equal writing, but I try my best to do at least SOME writing every day. Sometimes I’m swept away by the process, and the hours fly by like minutes. Others, I find myself rearranging the same few sentences interminably, then spend the rest of the day ruminating. Or comparing running shoes on Zappos. Or taste-testing different brands of pickle-relish. But I always give the writing a chance.

JR: What are your favorite films/scripts?
JM: The list of scripts and writers I admire – as well as my reasons for admiring them – is remarkably long. In general, I admire screenwriters who can capture a place, a person, or a feeling with very few words. Those who gravitate toward characters with rich inner lives, full of nuance and contradiction. William Goldman, Billy Wilder, Tony Gilroy, Scott Frank, David Webb Peoples, Paul Thomas Anderson, and the Coen Brothers spring immediately to mind.

JR: Lastly, what is your advice for beginning screenwriters or writers in general?
JM: Find a mentor, be open to listening to different perspectives, be patient and persistent. Nothing unique or especially insightful there, but if you can remember that writing is work and not sorcery, that will be immensely helpful.

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - May• 04•12

Show your writing who’s boss…

 

 

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Liar, liar, pants on fire, hanging on a telephone wire! Write a poem about yourself in which absolutely nothing is the truth.

 

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FICTION PROMPT

by Redd Williams

 

Write about a family picnic. Where is it? Who is there? Get creative and don’t be afraid to allow the family to be ‘dysfunctional’.

 

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NONFICTION PROMPT

by Lizi Gilad

 

“To be born has many meanings.  How many times we leave a life, enter a new one.”     –Lidia Yuknavitch

 

Think about all the different incarnations of your life; perhaps you’ve moved to a different country, perhaps your home has gone into foreclosure, perhaps you’re learning how to live without a beloved, or perhaps you’ve started a business.  Write a page describing the life you’ve most recently entered and a page describing your old life.  If you have not entered a new life within the last five years, write a page envisioning the life you’d like to enter next.

 

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SCREENWRITING PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Time to eavesdrop. You assignment this week is to grab something to write with (a notebook, your iPhone, or even your laptop), head to a public location, and listen in on and record other people’s conversations.  Write down what is being said word for word.  Soon you will notice patterns, colloquialisms, and other factors that could make your screenplay seem more relatable or interesting.  This can also make for some strange inspiration for your scenes.  Best places to eavesdrop:  a bar, restaurant, nail or hair salon, waiting rooms, Disneyland lines, the food court at the mall, front office of a school, grocery store.  I find that if you use your cell phone you can pretend you are text messaging or emailing someone and it seems less like you are some crazy stalker.  Have fun listening in…

 

 

 

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The difference between the almost right word

and the right word is really a large matter –

it’s the difference between

the lightning bug and the lightning.


~ Mark Twain

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Love in the Time of War and Other Calamities

Written By: Lindsey - May• 02•12

Here is our final piece in “Egomaniacal Despots, Genocidal Dictators, Ruthless Tyrants: The Politics of Terror in Postcolonial Literature.”

By Juan Carlos Pérez-Duthie

 

Like The Quiet American, there are plenty other examples of novels that I have read where the characters in foreign locales are thrown into the most challenging circumstances, and must make choices, even if the Damoclean sword of a strongman is not right above their heads.

One of these books is Michael Ondaatje’s 2001 fourth novel, Anil’s Ghost (Vintage International), set against the brutal civil war that tore apart the island nation of Sri Lanka in the 1980s and 1990s. Here the main character is a woman, Anil Tissera, a young forensic anthropologist who has spent most of her life away from her homeland, but who returns to it when asked by a U.N.-sponsored human rights group to investigate a murder that will implicate the government, thus putting her own life at risk.

During that time, the government of the former Ceylon, antigovernment insurgents in the north, and separatist guerrillas in the south, battled for power and, in the process, carried out all sorts of crimes against humanity. Ondaatje does not become a reporter (even if at times his words describing the violence resemble a journalistic account) to narrate the brutal past of his own country; he remains a writer who utilizes the benefits fiction accords him to tell a story unknown by so many people around the world.

 

Over the years complaints from Amnesty International and other civil rights groups had been sent to Switzerland and resided there, glacierlike. President Katugala claimed no knowledge of organized campaigns of murder on the island. But under pressure, and to placate trading partners in the West, the government eventually made the gesture of an offer to pair local officials with outside consultants, and Anil Tissera was chosen as the Geneva organization’s forensic specialist, to be teamed with an archaeologist in Colombo. (P. 16).

 

Through the character of the archaeologist, Sarath Diyasena, the author conveys an analysis of the differences between Sri Lanka’s conflict and what was happening around the same time in Central America, and what had taken place previously in the 1970s in South America (the passage is a bit expository, and not as poetic as some other sections in the book, but it gets the message across):

 

‘The bodies turn up weekly now. The height of the terror was ’eighty-eight and ’eighty-nine, but of course it was going on long before that. Every side was killing and hiding the evidence. Every side. This is an unofficial war, no one wants to alienate the foreign power. So it’s secret gangs and squads. Not like Central America. The government was not the only one doing the killing. You had, and still have, three camps of enemies – using weapons, propaganda, fear, sophisticated posters, censorship. Importing state-of-the-art weapons from the West, or manufacturing homemade weapons. A couple of years ago people just started disappearing. Or bodies kept being found burned beyond recognition. There’s no hope of affixing blame. And no one can tell who the victims are. (P. 17).

 

Sounds like the perfect setting for a dictator to take hold. Even without one, however, the results were more or less the same. And these can be attributed to a long history of colonial misrule – by the Portuguese, the Dutch, the English – and various warring ethnic groups. The struggle for independence began in the 1930s precisely because of the abuses and exploitation that came courtesy of the British Empire.

Once the grip of the British released Ceylon in 1948, the strong rule’s effect of forced cohesion was also lost, and this gave rise to disputes between its various ethnic groups (what happened after the death of Tito and the disintegration of Yugoslavia, what some fear will take place in Libya in the post-Gadhafi era). In their fight against colonialism, the people of the future Sri Lanka let their nationalism spiral out of control: the Sinhalese majority and the Tamil minority fought, and tore the country apart in the 1980s and 90s.

The phenomenon of the disappeared present in Sri Lanka had some sad antecedents in the late-1950s and early-1960s bloody conflict between Algeria and France, as that colony fought to free itself from the French. At that time, the practice of making someone “disappear” became common, and later replicated, to a much larger dimension, in Latin America during the 1970s and 1980s.

Dictators and juntas appeared, while innocents and insurgents disappeared indiscriminately in Argentina, Bolivia, Brazil, Chile, Guatemala, El Salvador, Paraguay, Peru, and Uruguay.

Argentina in the 1970s, under the rule of military junta, and the thousands of disappearances that took place as an every day occurrence, are integral elements in the narratives of the novels The Ministry of Special Cases (2007), by Nathan Englander; and Kamchatka (2010 English translation), by Marcelo Figueras. They are too in Lawrence Thornton’s 1987 novel Imagining Argentina (Bantam Books).

These are the opening lines of that book:

 

Even now, six years after the generals loosened their hold on Argentina, after their manicured hands were pried away from the delicate white throats of the disappeareds and the doors of certain buildings were closed and locked, even now Carlos Rueda’s gift retains its mystery. (P. 13).

 

What is not a mystery in any of these books is the brutality that often surrounds the characters and pervades the land they inhabit. It is a reflection of the real-life circumstances these countries experienced. For if violence is used against the colonial powers, once unleashed, it never really abandons the colonies. Or as Robert J. C. Young expressed in his 2001 book Postcolonialism – An Historical Introduction (Blackwell Publishing), “The agents of violence become subject to it” (P. 298).

The novels discussed throughout are but a few of the books that follow the theme of dictators. Also worth mentioning: Lily Tuck’s The News From Paraguay, Tom Stoppard’s play Night and Day, African writer Ahmadou Kourouma’s Waiting for the Vote of the Wild Animals, Rosa Shand’s The Gravity of Sunlight, Moses Isegawa’s Abyssinian Chronicles and Snakepit, and Isabel Allende’s La Casa de los Espíritus (The House of the Spirits).

Whether in Haiti or Sri Lanka, Argentina or Zimbabwe, the enduring legacy that fiction rescues from these countries’ pasts in the pages of this “dictatorship literature”, is bloody turmoil, and there will never be a shortage of men to perpetrate it, to keep grinding the politics of terror machinery. But also, these are narratives that showcase the rise of the human spirit. And that, in the end, is what makes us keep reading.

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Mad Men

Written By: Lindsey - Apr• 27•12

Today we have part three of  ”Egomaniacal Despots, Genocidal Dictators, Ruthless Tyrants: The Politics of Terror in Postcolonial Literature.”

By Juan Carlos Pérez-Duthie

The Last King of Scotland (Vintage) is the 1998 debut novel of British author and journalist Giles Foden. Like many other people, I too discovered it and became enthralled with it after seeing its 2006 cinematic version with Forest Whitaker as Idi Amin. Of all these books with a common theme that I have been examining, Foden’s is perhaps the one where the figure of the dictator best takes center stage and becomes a fully developed character, an antagonist to the narrator/protagonist, Scottish doctor Nicholas Garrigan.

Garrigan was an invention of Foden’s (He has stated that a British soldier who became close with Amin offered some inspiration for the doctor), but so much else in the book has a truthful background, starting with the depiction of Amin, who ruled from 1971 to 1979, and whose insanity cost some 300,000 lives and destroyed the African nation.

 

So there he stood, Idi, solid as a bronze bull, almost as if he, too, was waiting for something to happen. What did happen was that a greying official in tails, some sort of major-domo who had been scuttling up and down ever since we entered the hall, sounded a gong and then, straightening up, read from a paper:

“His Excellency President for Life Field Marshal Al Hadj Doctor Idi Amin Dada, VC, DSO, MC, Lord of All the Beasts of the Earth and Fishes of the Sea and Conqueror of the British Empire in Africa in General and Uganda in Particular welcomes the Court of Kampala and assembled worthies of the city to this annual banquet.” (Pp. 9-10).

 

These were real titles Amin had taken upon himself to be remembered, yet he was not alone in this egocentric and grandiose pomposity. In the last page of his “autobiography”, this is what Sukarno says coyly:

 

On one point I remain adamant. I do not wish all my titles on my tombstone so that it reads, “Here lies His Most Exalted Excellency, the Honorable Doctor Ingenieur Hadji Raden Sukarno, the First President of the Republic of Indonesia, Commander-in-Chief of the Armed Forces, Great Leader of the Revolution, Prime Minister, Mandatory of MPRS, Chairman of the Supreme Advisory Council, Peperti Chief War Administrator, Highest Leader of the National Front, Commander of the State Police” and so on… If that happened my spirit would return to walk the earth, for it could surely never rest quietly under all that. Please, no big imposing monument for me. (P. 312).

 

Sukarno pretended to be humble, but Amin openly craved and loved being the center of attention, shocking audiences with his pronouncements and actions, as if a constant reminder of who was in charge at all times. Foden had plenty of real-life material from which to select and construct his character.

 

“And I have also eaten human meat.”

This His Excellency almost shouted. A shocked silence fell over the table – almost visible, as if some diaphanous fabric had come down from the ceiling and settled over the steaming tureens and salvers. We looked up at him, not sure how to react.

Amin finally rose to his feet. “It is very salty,” he said, “even more salty than leopard meat.”

We shifted in our seats. (P. 13).

 

These few, dramatic sentences say so much about Amin that, what else could Foden add to his narrative? Turns out, there is plenty of Amin. To reach power, he resorted to what so many of these allegedly all-mighty men turn to because they know they would never be elected freely and democratically. So, he deposed former Ugandan president Milton Obote in a coup.

Amazingly, and much to Britain’s regret later on, Amin was a product of the British Colonial Army, and had a great devotion for all things Scottish. By the time Uganda stopped being a British colony in 1962, Amin had learned well enough from his masters how to conquer and rule. Once in power, he would then attack the British by expulsing all Asians out of Uganda (Many of them citizens of Great Britain), breaking relations with that country, and nationalizing its companies on Ugandan soil.

To spite the English even more, Amin, in his false sense of reality, sought to be welcomed somehow by Scotland, after siding with the Scots in their struggle for independence. Amin was so bombastic a personality, that no matter which words Foden puts into his mouth in the book, they always succeed at capturing our attention. In the following instance, Dr. Garrigan recalls in the “memoir” that constitutes The Last King of Scotland, a message that Amin had sent the Queen of England:

 

“Unless the Scots achieve their independence peacefully,” it read, “they will take up arms and fight the English until they regain their freedom. Many of the Scottish people already consider me last King of the Scots. I am the first man to ask the British government to end their oppression of Scotland. If the Scots want me to be their King, I will.” (P. 110).

 

Mercifully, wiser heads prevailed, and the Scottish people were not that crazy as to pay attention to this lunatic. Garrigan did, and he would come very close to paying with his life. Like Fowler in The Quiet American, the character of Amin’s physician sits on the fence as conditions around him deteriorate. And when the British ambassador to Uganda asks him to report on Amin at first, and later on to help finish him off, Garrigan refuses to betray what he believes are his principles. It is only when he finds his life endangered by Amin, after being incarcerated, and then used as a messenger, carrying a deadly cargo (unbeknownst to him), that he decides to act, just as Fowler had to once he realizes that Pyle and the Americans are behind the attacks that are killing innocent civilians.

 

I realized, in my slow way, that I had been the unwitting instrument of murder…

 

That event, and the mystery surrounding it, only made me keener to leave. But I felt trapped. There was something more. Apart from my abortive effort immediately after the cells, I hadn’t been able to summon up in myself the will to leave. Indeed, far from making practical moves towards an overland exit, I began to invent reasons in my mind about why I couldn’t do so. The truth is, there were still things I wanted to know about Amin. Now I wonder if it is that deadly, addictive curiosity, rather than anything tangible, that makes me continue to feel uncomfortable about myself. (P. 249).

Next Week:

Love in the Time of War and of Other Calamities

Like The Quiet American, there are plenty other examples of novels that I have read where the characters in foreign locales are thrown into the most challenging circumstances, and must make choices, even if the Damoclean sword of a strongman is not right above their heads.


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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Apr• 27•12

Time for some writing…

 

 

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Make a list of at least 10 wishes you have for another person.  My favorite ‘wish’ poem is by the late, great Lucille Clifton, “wishes for sons”. (You can find the poem at: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15601.  It is hilarious.)  Hopefully Lucille has provided some great inspiration.  Now, write a poem about your wishes.

 

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FICTION PROMPT

by Redd Williams

 

You are at a used bookstore, browsing. Describe the shelves, are they tidy, messy, over stacked? What section draws your attention? What goodies do you find there? Describe the books, are they yellowed and dog-eared? Or are the spines barely cracked and still have white pages? Also, describe the shopkeeper and mention two quirky things about the place. For example, there is a place in San Diego that has a cat that lives in the store.

 

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NONFICTION PROMPT

by Lizi Gilad

 

“I grew up in a house where the only regular guests were my relations.  On a certain day, enormous families of relatives would visit us, and there would be so many people that the noise and bodies would spill out to the backyard and onto the front porch.  Then for weeks no one would come.” –Richard Rodriguez, from Aria: A Memoir of a Bilingual Childhood

 

Do you invite guests to your home?  Do you enjoy hosting?  Do you enjoy being a guest in another home?  Do you prefer to be alone?  Write a page describing your most recent experience of having guests over or of being a guest.

 

 

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SCREENWRITING PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

If you are currently working on a project, take your protagonist and put him or her in bed with their foil (both in personality and in physical appearance).  Write a scene in which both characters are either very satisfied with the outcomes – or it is a complete disaster.  Have fun… and the dirtier the better!

 

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Writing is easy:

All you do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper

until drops of blood form on your forehead.

~ Gene Fowler

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Weekend of Books

Written By: John - Apr• 23•12

This past weekend saw the L.A. Times Festival of Books, purportedly the largest literary event of its kind in the nation. It was great to see so many readers and writers gathering in one spot. And it even brought together rival schools in the name of books, screenplays and fine literature! My colleagues from UC Riverside were prominently featured in this event on the campus of USC (where I teach), hosting panels and giving interviews. In previous years the festival played out on the UCLA campus, but last year it found a new home at USC. I was at the festival signing my new, first novel Tincture of Time.

TINCTURE OF TIME

The book’s publisher, World Nouveau/Mischievous Muse Press, an up and coming small press (featured in the current issue of Writer Magazine), was a great help in forwarding the book. It’s been great working with a small press. They’ve been very dedicated to honing the best book possible, with an attractive cover, and even ordering additional galleys for proofing, as well as devising clever ways of promoting the book. They’re also incredibly supportive, easy to communicate with and accessible. Which is not to say I haven’t had a great experience with a large press as well. The editor of my non-fiction book, The Healthy Edit, has remained totally accessible and a diehard advocate for the book. I guess it just depends which one is better for a particular book. But I digress. In a time when people are often questioning the future of books and of publishing, it was reassuring to see over a hundred and fifty thousand people eagerly visiting the many booths that lined all the roads of USC. And to see this sixteen year old girl who appeared with her mother at our booth so overcome with the idea of being a writer that she couldn’t contain her. I thought she was going to pass out, she was so excited by it all. When the publisher finally invited her to submit her fiction, she blushed, hugged the books she was carrying, and cried, “Really? Oh thank you!” And I have a feeling she’ll be a good writer, because feeling is a lot of it.

 

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Start the Weekend… Write!

Written By: Kari Hawkey - Apr• 20•12

It’s that time again…

 

 

on your mark, get set, go!

 

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POETRY PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

I think we have all wondered about what happens when you die.  If you are an atheist, imagine that you have died and discovered there is a god, and she is pissed off at you and Bill Maher.  Or… if you are a spiritual person, imagine that when you die there is nothing.  Nothing.  Now that you are totally depressed, write a poem employing this new found perspective.

 

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FICTION PROMPT

by Redd Williams

 

Two people are having dinner; one receives disturbing news about a family member and wants comfort and advice from the other.  What is the relationship between the two characters?  What is the big news?  Does the other character give comfort and advice? If so, how?  If not, why?

 

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NONFICTION PROMPT

by Lizi Gilad

 

Last week, you were prompted to get lost. This weekend the goal is to remain close to home and attempt, as Proust implores us, to see with new eyes. A snippet list is the key to more active, conscious noticing because the method allows you to scrawl notes as they arrive, freed from the constraints of left-brain logic.

 

No detail is too small. Consider, for example, Edward Abbey’s description of a breaking tree limb in Desert Solitaire: “somewhere a desiccated limb on an ancient dying cottonwood tree splits off from the trunk, and the rending fibers make a sound like the shriek of a woman”, or his description of a rainstorm: “not softly not gently, with no quality of mercy but like heavy water in buckets, raindrops like pellets splattering on the rock, knocking the berries off the junipers, plastering my shirt to my back…”

 

Maintain your awareness pricked like an antenna for moments and details that snag your attention. Establish a number before you begin—say, thirty noteworthy details–and don’t let yourself settle back into hazy familiarity until you’ve reached your noticing goal. Then use your snippets to write a page about your day or your place.

 

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SCREENWRITING PROMPT

by Kari Hawkey

 

Think about a movie you enjoyed but where you hated one specific aspect (For example – you hated the protagonist, the setting, or the ending).  Brainstorm your ideas for a change.  Now, write a treatment using these changes and see if this can inspire a new project.

 

 

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Writing is a struggle

against silence.


~ Carlos Fuentes

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J.R. Angelella’s Interview

Written By: Ashley R - Apr• 17•12

The Behind the Story #3

J. R. Angelella

 

I recently had the privilege of interviewing J. R. Angelella who won The Coachella Review’s Winter 2012 Short Fiction Contest with his story “Sauce.” When I read his story, I was instantly attracted to the smart characters and sharp witted dialogue in a world where outlandish things can happen. In the interview, we discuss his story “Sauce,” and his book Zombie which will be released on June 5th. Angelella also gives an insight into his inspirations and struggles as a writer.

 

1.) What was the inspiration for “Sauce?”

In 2003, I attended the opening of this bizarre art exhibit in Ithaca, New York. A local artist had painted these huge canvases each a slightly different shade of white. I remember thinking: this must be what it feels like to be stuck inside a television turned to static. There were maybe eight pieces. Each one was called White and then had a corresponding number. White #15. White #6. White #32. The attendees were mostly academic types— Ithaca College and Cornell professors—eating up the free cheese and wine, commenting how their children’s painted macaroni necklaces were more artistic than the exhibit. Needless-to-say, the next day there was a harsh review of the exhibit in the newspaper. And so the first incarnation of this story was born. The original title was “The Art of Apology” and centered only on the Kemper/Felix, artist-versus-critic conflict. The Bibiana storyline did not exist.

I finished a few drafts, but knew something was still missing, although I had no idea what. My girlfriend at the time, Kate, a terrific writer in her own rite, read the story and agreed that there was something missing. She said the characters were too one-note. Her advice was to rethink the story from a different perspective, not necessary a different POV, but to try a different entry point to the story, in order to try and find that missing piece. Well, clearly she was wrong, if she was asking me to “rethink” my story and one-note? Who did she think she was? She obviously didn’t get my story. So I did what any misunderstood writer would do—I line-edit the story for the next five years and called them revisions.

In 2008, I was an MFA student at Bennington College and I submitted “The Art of Apology” to my advisor for feedback. I thought if anyone would get what I was trying to do with the story (keeping in mind that I had NO idea what I was doing!) surely my advisor would. My advisor roundly ripped the story—calling it unbelievable, confused and confusing. The most inflammatory comment came at the end of the critique: and yet all of these errors could have been easily forgiven, if only your story had a soul. (Don’t worry—my eyes rolled back into my head too.)  A friend with a calmer voice of reason talked me out of fighting my advisor and suggested I just begin the story in a different place to see if the story took a different shape. I wanted to fight my friend soon after that.

I put the story away for a few weeks, before coming back to it. As luck would have it a snowstorm hit Brooklyn before I had a chance to begin the rewrite and, as I tend to do during snowstorms, I decided to make my father’s marinara sauce from scratch and then I would sit down to write. Once I got the sauce on the stove and simmering and the snowstorm had slowed, I finally sat down to begin the rewrite, and that’s when Bibiana walked into the story and “The Art of Apology” became “Sauce.”

Kate, my girlfriend who had since become my wife, refused to read “Sauce,” citing that if she read the story one more time without there being significant revisions she was going to become Kemper. After some mild begging, she finally read it and gave it thumbs up. That’s when I knew it was done. I never did send it back to my advisor.

2.) The character Bibiana has some very unusual quirks.  For instance, she thinks that dust causes cancer.  Is her character based on anyone that you know?

Bibiana is easily one of my favorite characters. I often think about writing prequel stories about her. She’s not based on any one person. She’s more of a composite of several people, but only on an ingredients level. Once you add them all together, she becomes totally fictional and totally Bibiana. What I find so amazing and admirable in some older folks is when they enter into that scary stage of life where important parts of themselves begin to give-up and go, and they somehow retain this irreverent and surprisingly youthful sense of humor about it all. A character’s sense of humor will often help me to better understand them and their desires when I’m working on a story.

Bibi suffers from Alzheimer’s disease too, which I watched my grandfather suffer from for many years. He was a strong and stubborn man and while he found himself frustrated, struggling with his speech and communicating simple ideas, he wasn’t going anywhere until he was goddamn ready to go. Much of this had to do with my grandmother—she was his sole caregiver through all of it, through every scary, awful, unthinkably painful stage. I’ve never seen love like that before. There is a lot of my grandparents’ in Bibi.

As for the quirkier traits, yes, these are also traits of folks I know. We all harbor weird rituals, I believe, that are ultimately survival skills. Does dust and dirt actually cause cancer? I have no idea. It seems like very few things DON’T cause cancer these days. Bibi believes that dirt and dust cause cancer because she can sweep dirt and dust. She can fight cancer by religiously cleaning and taking her shoes off at the front door. For her, cancer is not the end. She can fight the fucker. Whether real or imagined, she has created this ritual, this belief that is a survival technique, so she can keep hope alive that her son, Barry, will one day come for her.


3.) Art is the main source of controversy in “Sauce.” Living in Brooklyn, you must be exposed to the varieties of art that NYC offers. Do you share the same feelings as Felix towards Kemper’s type of art?

I think I split the difference between the two points-of-view.

In my greener days, if you had told me that you thought Federico Felllini’s film Cassanova, starring Donald Sutherland, was a masterpiece, I would have had no problem publicly proving you wrong. When it comes to art, though, right or wrong, people like what they like. End of story. And thank God I’ve come around to that perspective because publishing a kinetic little novel like Zombie definitely polarizes people. Strangers are not afraid of communicating exactly how they feel about me and my novel—good and bad. I just hope I never get the kiss of death response of indifference.

But seriously though, no one should ever watch the film Cassanova. EVER!

4.) Do you think that certain art forms are understated in the general public?

Recently, I’ve received questions from readers asking me to talk about my favorite zombie comic or, why Jeremy Barker, my main character, doesn’t talk about zombie comics at all. I realized that while I can hold my own talking about zombie films, I have zero knowledge of zombie comics. For most of my life, if I’m being completely honest, I gave very little value to comic books and graphic novels. For no real reason, really. When I came to this realization, it really bothered me, so I set out to educate myself and not just on zombie comics either, but just comics in general. Not surprisingly, I’m a total comic nerd now. The folks at my comic shop—Manhattan Comics—speak their own language when they get going about comics. It’s wild.

I stopped by the other day and was met by this teenage boy pushing a broom down the aisle. He asked if I needed any help. I told him I was all set, that the owner had helped me the other day—that he had recommended the new Garth Ennis series Crossed: Badlands series. The teen looked at me with the most bored eyes I have ever seen and says, “You’ve read The Walking Dead, right?” I told him I had not, but was a fan of the TV show, and before I could even finish my sentence the teen dead-dropped his broom, pushed past me and began pulling Walking Deads off the shelf, stacking them in his arm. He looked at me still pulling comics, shushed me, and then whisper, “Don’t ever say that out loud. It’s embarrassing.”

Right now I am working my way through the Preacher series as well The Walking Dead (shhhh!) and the new-ish zombie comic Crossed: Badlands. I am totally hooked. The writing is terrific—break-neck pacing, taut suspense, fully-developed characters, snappy dialogue—just great stuff. The artwork is absolutely sublime too. There is this whole other world of art out there that I can clearly see now for the first time.

5.) Your first novel Zombie coming out on June 5, 2012.  What is it like to publish your 1st novel?

Surreal. The whole process has been an outer body experience for me. I have spent so long living inside Zombie’s messed-up, little world that when my editor told me we were finally finished and the book was done and being set out to print, I kind of had a mini-freak out because I didn’t want it to end. When you connect with someone creatively as I did with my editor at Soho Press, Mark Doten, you don’t ever want to do it differently. It was a fantastic experience and one I hope to have again with my next novel. Soho Press has championed my quirky genre-bending book at every stage. Zombie simply doesn’t exist without Soho Press. They went all in on this book, all in on me as a writer, and I am just so humbled by their support and effort.

6.) I read an excerpt from your upcoming book Zombie on your website jrangelella.com. Just from the excerpt, I could see that Zombie is a refreshingly different coming of age story filled with a brilliant combination of grit and humor. In the excerpt, the father of the main character refers to a knotted tie as a “limp dick.” Throughout the excerpt there are similar references. Do you think references like this will be criticized as being inappropriate for young-adult fiction? How would you respond to such criticism?

I’m glad you asked this question. I should clarify something—Zombie is not young adult fiction. The narrator is a teenage boy, but the content and execution of that content are very much adult. I say this not as indictment YA lit at all. As you mentioned in your question, I write YA too. My wife and I are working on a Southern Gothic, supernatural YA series together. It’s not an issue of quality. It’s content and execution.

You’re right to ask if it’s inappropriate for a young adult audience, and while I’m personally conflicted on that, this book was not written with a teenage audience in mind. Kids are far more knowledgeable than we give them credit for and could easily navigate the language and decide for themselves if it was worthy of their interest. That being said, content-wise the novel is not what it appears to be, which is why Soho Press is publishing it as literary fiction side, and not under their Soho Teen banner. Zombie is part coming-of-age, part zombie horror, part romance, part family drama, part mystery, part fantasy, and part addiction narrative.

I think it will it appeal to teen readers. They’ll come to my book the same way I came to read Stephen King in grade school—something about the book will capture their attention and next thing you know they’ll be in the corner reading it. I remember being in after-school, sitting in the corner reading THE SHINING, paranoid that someone was going to walk up and catch me reading some depraved scene. But you know what, I wasn’t breaking glass bottles in the alley, or smoking weed in the bathroom, or getting drunk off cheap beer. I was reading a book, so everyone pretty much just left me alone.

7.) How are you able to successfully combine so many different genres into one story?

Whenever I sit down to write a straight forward story I find myself crossing genres, taking bits from here and pieces from there, weaving them into my narrative that ultimately becomes it its own unique thing. I wish I didn’t do that. I wish my mind wasn’t wired that way. It would make my life (and my agent’s job) a whole lot easier, but then I’d just get bored. The book I’m working on now is equally as unique—a revenge fantasy set inside a biblical redemption narrative, oh, and there are gladiators. My novels often cross genres.


8.) You have already received exceptional praise for Zombie.  Much of the praise of your book is geared towards your ability to write the adolescent mind.  Since you write both adult and young-adult fiction incredibly well, do you find yourself drawn to one more than the other? Why?

Good question. I wouldn’t say that I’m drawn to one more than the other. For me, it’s about the characters and their desires. If I am bored, something isn’t working—either the characters are flat, or their desires are lame. If the narrator is a thirty year old man, so be it. If she’s a sixteen year old girl, so be it. It has to be something I would want to read. That’s what drives me early on. I know how my brain works and if I begin the writing process by deciding on what genre or platform to write in, then I know I’m already sunk. It has to start with characters. And that comes from understanding how my brain works. I have friends who do the opposite, and are way more successful and productive than me. Maybe I’ll grow out of it, but I doubt it.


9.) What do you do in your spare time that contributes to your writing the most?

I’d have to say not writing contributes to my writing the most. I listen to a lot of music. You could even go so far as to call it obsessive. Music plays a very significant role in my life. I also watch a lot of television and movies and spend a lot of time discussing nerdy writer topics with my wife, like underused conflicts, missed opportunities, baggy pacing, information dumps in dialogue and so on. And when I say we discuss these nerdy topics, it’s usually about the latest episode of Mob Wives or Million Dollar Listing. It’s a needed balance in my life and distance from the writing that I need. It’s my time to decompress. I have a tendency of too wrapped up in my work and it can be tough to resurface sometimes. I had a conversation with writer friend of mine about this very thing when I found myself revising a very dark and heavy section of Zombie. I felt like I was on the verge of bottoming out. My friend, kindly, reaffirmed that I was only a little bit crazy, not totally crazy, and that I would otherwise be okay. He quite accurately likened the process to the cave-exploring sport of spelunking—climbing down inside a deep and dark and cold and lonely place, only to later re-emerge like nothing ever happened at all. That’s what I do. Other than wasting away my brain on inappropriately loud music and getting crazy with the reality television, I tend to live a pretty quiet life.


10.) I heard that you will be attending the June residency at UCR. Can you give us a little tidbit of what we can expect at residency?

Expect me to set fire to the liquor store across the street from the resort. Expect me to publicly sacrifice Stephen Graham Jones to the writing God’s in order for us all to steal his freakishly high-level of productivity. Expect me to quote inappropriate lines from The Wire all weekend. Sadly, only one of these is true.

Yes, I have been asked to join my friends and fellow Bennington College classmates, Megan Mayhew Bergman (Birds of a Lesser Paradise) and Stephen Dau (Book of Jonas), for a few days out at UCR. I believe there will a panel discussion on writing and publishing our first books—as all three of us have our first books out either right now, like them, or soon, like me (June 5). Other than that, my plan is to make myself available to whomever to talk about whatever. I remember when writers would come and visit my school and they never felt accessible at all and always disappeared after events. I’ve been out to UCR before and it’s a totally different and awesome vibe there. I guess the only other thing you can expect is for Tod Goldberg and I to have a Beastie Boy lyrical throw down. Yeah, that’ll probably happen too.

 

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The Dragon’s Roar

Written By: Lindsey - Apr• 17•12

From “Egomaniacal Despots, Genocidal Dictators, Ruthless Tyrants: The Politics of Terror in Postcolonial Literature”

By Juan Carlos Pérez-Duthie



The Comedians exhibits several parallels with Greene’s famous novel The Quiet American, which came out several years earlier. This 1955 book also has a foreign locale as setting, plenty of intrigue and revelations about characters, all-too-human traits that don’t make everyone sympathetic, a prescient nature, criticism of U.S. policies, and a woman caught in the middle of a love triangle. The Comedians takes place in a land where a feeble, old man acts like a god and his evil actions threaten to consume everything in their path. In The Quiet American, though, there is no such figure of a tyrant in charge, because at the time the book was written, and in the time of the setting, the Indo-China political situation was still evolving into something increasingly complex, dangerous and vicious, with several factions vying for control of Vietnam and presenting themselves as saviors of the country, each in its own way.

Here too there are three main characters: a British journalist, Thomas Fowler; a young, American idealist, Alden Pyle, or the titular “quiet American” and who in typical Greene fashion is more than what he seems; and Phuong, a young Vietnamese woman, the center of affection, and rivalry, for both these men.

With the absence of a clearly defined strongman, and instead, many players pulling strings in all directions, the horrors are those more commonly unleashed by war rather than by one man’s brain and will, and still only scratch at the magnitude of what would evolve later on with the withdrawal of the French and the escalating American intervention. The same year that Greene’s book came out, South Vietnam gained its first president, Ngô Đình Diệm, after the French left, and many considered him a corrupt and authoritarian figure not too far removed from being a dictator. He was also a staunch American ally and anti-communist. His sister-in-law, Madame Ngô Đình Nhu, particularly reviled, was known as “the Dragon Lady of South Vietnam” (Evil can be an equal-opportunity employer. According to documentarian Tom Ambrose in his book The Nature of Despotism – From Caligula to Mugabe, the Making of Tyrants (New Holland Publishers, 2008), “The aggression, ruthlessness and single-mindedness needed to seize power and to dominate a country are traditionally seen as male characteristics. But in nature it is often the female that exhibits these traits”. P. 215).

Greene focuses on the atrocities that can be committed in the name of an ideal: precisely what Pyle does. The following is a sample of the misguided American interventionism in the conflict that would sadly become the norm as the U.S. entered more deeply into the quagmire:

 

I found myself for a moment envying them their sterilized world, so different from the world that I inhabited – which suddenly inexplicably broke in pieces. Two of the mirrors on the wall flew at me and collapsed half-way. The dowdy Frenchwoman was on her knees in a wreckage of chairs and tables. Her compact lay open and unhurt in my lap and oddly enough I sat exactly where I had sat before, although my table had joined the wreckage around the Frenchwoman. A curious garden-sound filled the café: the regular drip of a fountain, and looking at the bar I saw rows of smashed bottles which let out their contents in a multi-coloured stream – the red of porto, the orange of cointreau, the green of chartreuse, the cloudy yellow of pastis, across the floor of the café. The Frenchwoman sat up and calmly looked around for her compact. I gave it to her and she thanked me formally, sitting on the floor. I realized that I didn’t hear her very well. The explosion had been so close that my ear-drum had still to recover from the pressure. (P. 160).

 

The author, through Fowler, is almost poetic in the way he describes the explosion in the section above. And when he actually writes about the casualties, in just a few sentences he is equally powerful about the resulting carnage.

 

We were among a congregation of mourners. The police could prevent others entering the square; they were powerless to clear the square of the survivors and the first-comers. The doctors were too busy to attend to the dead, and so the dead were left to their owners, for one can own the dead as one owns a chair. A woman sat on the ground with what was left of her baby in her lap; with a kind of modesty she had covered it with her straw peasant hat. She was still and silent, and what struck me most in the square was the silence… The legless torso at the edge of the garden still twitched, like a chicken which had lost its head. From the man’s shirt, he had probably been a trishaw driver. (Pp. 161-162).

 

Atrocities of a different kind – on a much larger scale – are referenced in the 2009 Canadian bestseller The Disappeared (Black Cat/Grove), by author Kim Echlin. The novel is a love affair set against a background that could hardly be grimmer: the Cambodian genocide under the mad rule of Pol Pot and the years after in which Cambodia struggled to return to some semblance of normalcy. And yet, it never suffocates the book because of the way Echlin conveys the tragedy.

Echlin had in Pol Pot, leader of the murderous Khmer Rouge, a fantastically egomaniacal dictator. However, she chose to go another route: intimating at the nightmares lived by one of the main characters, Serey, a Cambodian student and musician whose family fled the horrors of the communists and who met in Montreal a young girl, Anne Greves, narrator of the story. In the narrative, she addresses her paramour in the second person, as if writing him a letter. Minimalist in her approach, the author nevertheless makes use of that technique to her advantage, by charging every word chosen with resounding power:

 

Bombs were dropping the length of the Thai border as you grew up. Tons and tons of bombs. (P. 37).

 

When Anne travels to the Cambodian capital, Phnom Penh, to meet with Serey after he has felt the calling of returning back home, in simply a two-page chapter Echlin revisits the evil that Pol Pot spawned.

 

Imagine a street; imagine waking up one morning and teenaged voices outside shouting, Comrades, it is Year Zero. (P. 69).

 

… Year Zero. The country has a new name. Everyone works on farms. Seed. Plant. Harvest with knives. Pound. Winnow. Bag for the soldiers.

Music is forbidden. Talk is forbidden.

The soldiers make bonfires of libraries and paper money. Everyone is hungry.

Banks. Gone.

Mail. Gone.

Telephones. Gone.

Radio. Gone.

Teenagers serve Angka, the Organization. The leader is Brother Number One. No one knows yet his name is Pol Pot. No one knows he used to be a schoolteacher called Saloth Sar. How did this happen? People fell asleep and when they woke up nothing was the same. Would a person risk helping a neighbor if a nervous, shouting teenager were pointing a gun?

In Year Zero there is no past. (P. 70).

 

That’s it. The author does not go further into developing Pol Pot but, because the consequences of what he did still haunt, and will haunt Cambodia for generations to come, everything that takes place in the novel unfolds because of what this man did in the 1970s.

Much less brutal and sanguinary, but still ruthless and imperious, was another Asian strongman, Sukarno, the first president of Indonesia after the country gained its independence from the Netherlands.

Sukarno, who today can be considered a “benevolent dictator” if compared to others of his kind, had been the leader of his country’s struggle for independence, and was hailed by many at first. But as it usually happens with power, it corrupts men, or brings out the worst in them.

A 1978 novel, The Year of Living Dangerously (Penguin), by Australian author and journalist Christopher J. Koch, exposed what it meant to live under the fist of Sukarno like no other book till then. And of course, with the 1982 movie version based on the book, and starring Mel Gibson, Sigourney Weaver, and Linda Hunt, this story got to be known even better.

I tracked down the book after having seen the movie a long time ago, and then again recently. Never having heard of the author, I did not know what to expect from his writing. To my surprise, it presented a portrayal of life in 1965 Indonesia that seemed much more realistic than a pseudo-memoir published that same year titled Sukarno: An Autobiography – As told to Cindy Adams (The Bobbs-Merril Company, Inc.), which was nothing more than a hagiography ghostwritten by an American gossip columnist.

Adams’ book, which purports to be non-fiction, nevertheless seems much more enveloped in half-truths than a fictionalized account like Koch’s Dangerously. This is how Sukarno, in his first chapter, The Reason for Writing this Book, explains why he felt the need to give an account of his life, which he does as a first person narrator, but mentioning himself in the third person:

 

And so the time has come. If I am ever to set my story down, I must do it now. I may not have the opportunity later. I know people are curious as to whether or not Sukarno was a Japanese collaborator during the Second World War. I suppose only Sukarno can explain that period of his life and so it seems right he should. For years people have asked: Is Sukarno a dictator? Is he a Communist? Why doesn’t he allow freedom of the press? How many wives does he have? Why does he build new department stores when his citizens are in rags…?

Only Sukarno himself can answer. (P. 16).

 

This is how Koch views Sukarno in his novel, as presented by the unnamed first-person narrator of The Year of Living Dangerously. The account is much more in tune with what journalists and critics wrote at the time about the Indonesian leader. In this instance, Koch’s narrator – he is an observer, and not the novel’s central character, that would be Hamilton (Gibson in the movie) – describes what Sukarno has done to get the Indonesian population riled up and behind him. He confronts the world, and pits Indonesia in a perpetual state of us vs. them, a policy of confrontation known as Konfrontasi, which masks the regime’s shortcomings and failures:

 

The whole Western world and India as well were confronted, while the Bung warmed his ego at the blaze, striking dictatorial attitudes from Europe’s nineteen thirties, his black pitji tilted in defiance: a baffling mixture of menace and playboy appeal. The people sometimes called him Bapak – father – but he was really the Bung, the daring elder brother, who carried out every outrageous scheme they had ever longed for, and shouted every imagined insult at the world’s Establishment – and at shady colonial masters who might try to come back. (P. 8).

 

Sukarno is not only a towering presence in this novel, like Trujillo in The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, but a character too, as in The Feast of the Goat. Something else that author Koch is adroit at in his narrative, is the way he makes the capital city of Jakarta come alive, and links it to everything that Sukarno has done and does. The city is the most blatant example of Sukarno using his country as a laboratory and playpen.

 

In apathy it sprawled, on its flat, swampy plain where the heat was a changeless oven; and it barely seemed a city. This century’s girds of glass and steel were rarities; it was still in spirit a Dutch-colonial town, a stretched-out frieze of squat commercial buildings in parchment-coloured stucco… It had a curious, staid charm, this rejected colonial frieze, but now the mechanisms of the departed masters were ceasing to function. Public transport had almost stopped as fuel and spare parts ran out; the canals had become sewers; the roads were so pot-holed they pounded a car to pieces. (Pp. 25-26).

 

And while the city crumbles, this is what Sukarno, in his megalomania, does:

 

Meanwhile, huge loans were spent on armaments and new buildings, and the President had made his decree: Jakarta must be an instant world capital. Monuments rose, topped by ecstatically gesturing figures like ghosts from the Third Reich, or Stalin’s Russia… Engineer Sukarno flew over it all in his special white helicopter, supervising operations; and we in the Wayang Club watched as eagerly for the chopper’s comings and goings as those villagers to whom the President would descend, as Billy Kwan had put it, like Vishnu in his magic car. (P. 26).

 

These fragments portray so well many of the qualities that are typical of dictators: the delusional sense of grandeur, the belief that they are the father and savior of the nation, the exploitation of nationalism against colonialism as a rallying force, etc.

Within Sukarno’s Indonesia, a smaller story, a human-scale story, takes place, and that is what draws us into the dangerously political time that Asian country is experiencing in Koch’s pages. All the authors analyzed here so far do the same: they present a context where there may be repression or war, typically at the hands of one man, and place the characters and their predicaments in the larger sphere of those men who succeed mostly at disrupting and destroying, even though they believe they are organizing and creating.

In terms of destruction, it would be unfair to compare, say, Sukarno and Trujillo to Hitler, Mao, Pol Pot or Stalin. For the evil of those tyrants was of such magnitude, that they defy any logic. Trujillo would massacre Haitians, for example, but he would contend that he was defending his country; Sukarno lived as a god-king while his people died in misery, and yet he argued he did everything for them. To grasp Hitler as a human being, or have him presented as a full-fledged character in a fictionalized account, is utterly difficult because his crimes are so mind-numbingly unbelievable.

Someone like Dr. Duvalier, well, yes, he was a monster to many, but as time has gone by, memory becomes short, and today, with Haiti still in dire straits, suddenly the Duvaliers are being remembered fondly by some (Witness the euphoric reception that many Haitians gave to “Baby Doc” Duvalier when he recently returned to Haiti). Italian journalist Riccardo Orizio addresses this issue of “dictator rehabilitation”, but never repentance, in his 2004 book of interviews Talk of the Devil: Encounters with Seven Dictators (Walker & Company):

 

At that moment, a brutal tyrant can begin to contemplate his rehabilitation and the devil to relax and to look from a distance at the growing disenchantment with the new regime, accompanied by a longing for the old one (P. 243; translated from the Spanish-version of the book, printed in Mexico in 2007).

 

There is probably no wickedness of heart that can be ascribed to these fans of the younger Duvalier; for many, it is that they think things in the days of the father were simply not as terrible as they are today in Haiti. With those who choose to follow the tenets of Hitler and Stalin, however, those neo-Nazis and die-hard communists, there is a true evil present in them as there was in those two men, coupled with anger and hate, which seems to encompass all that they do and profess.

As long as some benefit from the largesse and favoritism bestowed by the conditions set in place by a dictator, such dictator will have fans. Ergo, Castro remains in power, or plenty of African despots, like the octogenarian Robert Mugabe, who refuses to step down and has been dragging Zimbabwe into hell with him (In 2009, Chielo Zona Eze’s debut novel The Trial of Robert Mugabe depicted what this madman has wrought in his country), still have defenders.

In his 2006 memoir of Africa, When a Crocodile Eats the Sun (Back Bay Books/Little, Brown & Company), Zimbabwean journalist Peter Godwin recalls the story of how he was asked by a British TV station to make a documentary on why his native country became a basketcase. For his own curiosity, he wanted to answer questions that had been perplexing to him, and that resonate in dictatorship literature:

 

Do Africa’s problems reside principally in the continent’s underlying environment, or with imposed colonial distortions, or with the travesty of Africa’s postcolonial leadership? (P. 156).

 

Probably no other African “leader” raises more questions, provokes more fascination, and creates more revulsion, than Idi Amin Dada, ruler of Uganda. Mugabe may be despicable, but Amin was abominable. Because, how many of these men would eat their enemies? Not many. Amin allegedly did (add to that fortunately short list of cannibal autocrats, Jean-Bédel Bokassa, self-proclaimed emperor of the Central African Republic).

Next Week:

Mad Men

The Last King of Scotland (Vintage) is the 1998 debut novel of British author and journalist Giles Foden. Like many other people, I too discovered it and became enthralled with it after seeing its 2006 cinematic version with Forest Whitaker as Idi Amin. Of all these books with a common theme that I have been examining, Foden’s is perhaps the one where the figure of the dictator best takes center stage and becomes a fully developed character, an antagonist to the narrator/protagonist, Scottish doctor Nicholas Garrigan.

 

 

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